Showing posts with label action. Show all posts
Showing posts with label action. Show all posts

Friday, December 21, 2018

The BulletProof Ghost Comic Preorder


First off, if you never got word that I've transported most of my blogging activity over to my WEBSITE, I apologize.  There are a LOT of updates over there that I've neglected to post here.  So if you would meander over to BulletProofGhost.com and wait a few seconds for the Subscribe button to pop up and enter your email in that box to receive free updates and maybe some free goodies here and there.  Also click on the books and merch sections for new tshirts you can buy online and two short stories I published this year you can purchase for the low low price of $.99!

Secondly, I have a new crowdfunding campaign to once again to try... try... try to fund art for a BulletProof Ghost comic book.  This time I'm using Indiegogo.com, like when I funded In Spades' novel cover, which went... okay... ish last time.  The campaign will run until January 27th, 2019, so there is a lot of time for you to pledge for signed copies of the book, a custom BulletProof Ghost Funko Pop and even being drawn into the comic book itself!

Click here to go straight to the campaign.

Thanks again for the support and please go to the website.  I'll try to crosspost here, but I am really busy lately, so it slips my mind.

later

-Jake dh

Monday, September 4, 2017

Free Preview of Dreadful: Wolves in the Ice

This is a new short story series I've been working on. I wanted to have it out by Tri-Con, but things always to seem to take longer than I think or hope they do.  This is NOT the final version, but it is pretty close minus any typos or a few tweaks here and there.  Thanks for reading!

Dreadful: Wolves in the Ice

2
Lynn swore she would never come back to Alaska.  She hated this place.  The cold, it got to her.  She had spent the last eleven years where the weather shifted.  She got used to semi-normal seasons.  Her dad would have taken the term 'normal' personally.  He loved Alaska.  He was heartbroken when she left to live her own life.  She couldn't stay forever, she told him.  She didn't think that would be the last time she saw him.  She couldn’t have known.

The storm was getting pretty bad.  These rural roads were hell on a good day, but this was not a good day… well, night at this point.  She just wanted to get to her dad's cabin.  He left it to her in his will.  It was the only thing he left her.  Lynn's brother got everything else.  Of course he did.  He never left.  He was perfect and everyone in the family just loved him.  Her, not so much.

Lynn needed to be alone.  After what happened in New York.  After what Allun did, she just needed to be away from everyone.  Just for a while.  She started to cry again, "Goddamn it," she said out loud, "You're not going to let him hurt you anymore," she wiped the moisture from her cheeks. 

She was having a hard enough time seeing without crying her eyes out.  The snow was really picking up.  She slowed down below twenty miles an hour.  Her headlights could barely cut through the white static in front of her. 

THUD!  She heard it.  She felt it.  She had hit something with her car.  Oh my god, she thought.  Did she hit a person?  Surely not.  Who the hell would be out in this blizzard?  No, she thought.  Lynn exited her car.  Snow and ice hit her in the face with a dozen little stings.  She pushed her way through the blistering wind and sleet.

The figure on the ground looked like a person, "Oh shit.  No, no, no," she said frantically, "Mister?" she could tell it was a man as she crept closer," she noticed he was breathing.  She felt a bit relieved, but he could still be really injured.

She noticed something else as she was right on top of him.  The man was naked.  Completely buck-ass naked, "The hell?" she bent down to check his pulse.  He wasn't going to last long like this, she thought.  Why the hell is he naked?  Maybe this is like a mob hit or something.  Alaska-style.  Throw someone out in a blizzard and let them freeze.  That's silly, she dismissed the idea.  It didn't matter.  She needed to get him back in the car. She needed to get him to a hospital.

The man's eyes sprung open.  The man leapt up onto his feet.  The naked man grabbed Lynn and slammed her against the car.  He was so strong, "What the hell happened?  Who are you?" he shook his head.  He tried to clear his head from the car impact, "Did you hit me with your goddamn car?"

"It was an accident.  I couldn't see. Are you okay?" she squeaked out.  She was scared for a totally new reason now.  This guy was crazy.  She tried to wriggle out of his grasp, but his hands acted like vice grips.  Not just for a naked skinny guy in the middle of a blizzard, but strong for any person.  She couldn’t budge an inch.

The man let go of her and grabbed his head, "It's too late," he whipped his head around.  His eyes were bright yellow, "I put it off for too long.  I can't control it," Lynn heard bones cracking in the man's body as he screamed in pain, "Guess you'll have to do lady," he gave her a sinister stare as his incisors grew a few inches in front of her eyes.  Blood started pour out of the man's mouth as the bones and muscles in his body shifted in a grotesque manner.  His grin split the side of his cheek as he let out an inhuman shriek. A distorted howl.

Lynn ran to her driver's side door.  The contorted, naked man was distracted as he... whatever was happening to him.  She put her foot on the accelerator as hard as she could, but only spun out.  She forgot what it was like to drive in real snow.  She gently put her foot down and she got traction.  Lynn went around the man as she swore she saw his head was stretching.  Every inch of change audibly fractured his bones and ripped at his tendons.  His teeth were sharp and jagged.  Those yellow eyes burned through her with insatiable hunger.

Whatever the hell was going on, Lynn was getting out of here.  She was well on her way.  Suddenly she felt another impact.  This time on the back of her car.  Like something had slashed her back left tire.  She spun 180 degrees.  Lynn had no control and just held on.  She closed her eyes until she heard the clatter of shattered glass and denting metal. Lynn swore she was screaming, but it didn’t seem to rise above the chaotic crashing around her.

Lynn felt blood flow down her face.  Some of the glass hit her like a shotgun blast.  Lynn saw that the passenger side had hit a tree.  She shook the dizziness from her head.  She needed to get the hell out of here.  She reached for the door with her bleeding hand.  Blood smeared on the handle as she fumbled the door open.

Lynn saw her back tire as she fell into the snow, still off balance from the impact.  It had been ripped open.  Were those claw marks?  She looked around.  The snow was coming down even harder, but she somehow could feel that the contorted man could still be after her.

Her father's cabin couldn't be more than half a mile east into the woods.  She could make it.  She knew it.  Lynn put one foot in front of the other.  She wrapped herself in the only blanket she had and headed into the white nothingness. 

3

Lynn was running now.  As fast as her legs could propel her through the snowstorm.  She knew these woods well enough.  She spent a lot of time here as a kid, but a lot had changed.  She just needed to keep running.  Lynn reached into her pocket for her cell phone.  She hadn't even thought about calling someone.  No one was going to be able to get to her soon, but it was worth a shot.  She kept looking up at the path in front of her.  She did not want to run face first into a tree.  Lynn looked at her cracked screen.  It must had been damaged in the crash.  She hoped it would still work.

Lynn brushed her red hair out of her face as she dialed 911.  There was a voice on the other end, "Hello," Lynn tried to yell over the wind, "I'm near Elk Clearing, there's been an accident," she couldn't hear the person on the other end.  It wasn't likely they could hear her, "Shit!" whether it was the wind or the damage to the phone, help wasn’t coming.

Lynn shoved her slightly damaged phone into her coat.  She realized that drunk asshole said he was going to be at Elk Clearing, "No," she said.  It was worth a shot.  The guy might have a gun.  If that naked... thing was still after her, then a gun would come in really handy.

Lynn made a slight detour to the right.  She trudged through the two-foot-deep snow.  The crunching of the already freezing snow was all she could hear for a moment.  She focused on pushing her way to Elk’s Clearing.  It was the only thing that mattered. 

That's when she heard snarling.  Through the howling wind, she heard an animal growling.  Lynn spun around to see those yellow eyes.  Even through the swirling dots of white, she could see those eyes.  It was all she could see as she quickly turned around to sprint toward that clearing.

Lynn tripped over a downed tree as she stumbled through the woods into the clearing.  The snow was actually starting to let up.  She could hear herself think for a moment.  She shook the snow off of her head as she heard a voice further into the clearing.

"The bloody hell?" the voice called out.  The man's accent was distinctively British, "What are you doing here?"

She made out the man's face, "The asshole from the bar?" it was indeed the man from the bar, but he wasn't disheveled and drunk.  He was in an insulated trench coat with a sock hat wrapped around his head and ears.  She shook off the disbelief and just rolled with it, "You were going to go hunting!  You have a gun, right?  There's a vampire or something chasing me."

"No, love," the man said, "Not a vampire," he saw the yellow eyes peeking through the tree line.  They were at least seven feet off of the ground.  A white fur-covered hand grabbed the tree next to it as a massive creature stepped out from the forest. Black claws scratched into the bark.  The deep trails were carved into the wood with almost no effort.  Its foot wasn’t flat like a person’s but arched up, like an animal. Unlike an animal, it was standing up straight on two feet.

The man smirked, "That... is a werewolf."

4

The British man pulled a silver sawed off shotgun out of his dark blue trench coat.  The single barrel wasn’t rounded like a normal shotgun, but cut into a point on the top of the barrel.  He pumped the weapon one time as he walked toward the over seven-foot werewolf that had revealed itself.

It snarled as it carefully analyzed its two prey.  One was utterly defenseless and not worth one ounce of worry.  The other it seemed to know from somewhere.  It may have just know his kind.  Armed and formidable. Clever and dangerous.

Lynn was beyond frightened.  She couldn’t scream.  She froze in both absolute terror and due to the fact she was literally freezing while sitting in the thick snow.  She just watched the two figures squaring off in front of each other.  Both of them used an equal amount of caution.  Neither made a move for more than a few seconds.

The Britain stepped to the side while keeping his pointy shotgun aimed right at the creature, “So, you got my invitation.  It had been said that part of you remembers what happens when you’re a wolf,” the monster just deeply growled at him, but kept its distance, “Now you realize that when I ‘drunkenly’ and purposely brayed that I was going hunting; I meant I was hunting you.  You just walked into a trap.  You.  Not the other way around,” the wolf actually looked angry as the man taunted it, “Now you don’t have the smarts to fully understand how screwed you actually are. Do you, Fido?”

The werewolf called out with a rage that surprised Lynn.  Was this thing still a person, she wondered, on the inside that is?  Lynn crawled backward as the white monster couldn’t hold itself back anymore.  The wolf ran at the Englishman on all fours, instead on two feet as it had been using this whole time.  The wolf had indeed taken over.

That’s when a metallic snapping sound cut through the blustery wind. A red spray of liquid jutted into the air.  The wolf rolled around as it lost footing.  It yelped like an injured dog.  Blood could be seen in the white snow.  The man casually walked up to the creature.  Its leg had been caught in a silver, shiny bear trap.  The snapped shut apparatus almost cut the thing’s leg off.  A burning scent accompanied smoke in the air.  The silver was burning through the wolf’s leg.  The monster clawed at the trap, but only succeeded in burning its paws.

The man strolled along through the snow, “All it took was a little ridicule,” he aimed at the wolf’s face, “And you lost yourself to the animal,” he pulled the trigger.  The monster’s face basically disintegrated in a blitz of blood, fur and bone.  Its snout was gone.  Those yellow eyes burst like grapes.  The faceless werewolf fell forward into the snow.  Blood spread out onto the snow and quickly froze.
Text Copyright © 2017 by Jacob Harris (Jake dh)
All Rights reserved. No part of this book can be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical including photocopying, recording or by any information storage or retrieval system, without permission of publisher/author.
Dreadful created by Jacob Harris (Jake dh)

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Tuesday, July 18, 2017

Finally, A Release Date for The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades




It has been longer than I honestly should be comfortable with since I last blogged.  To touch on some personal matters, I was switched to first shift at my job-job in October.  I only recently in the last few weeks, was switched back to nights.  When I'm on days, time to blog just kind of falls to the wayside.  I concentrated on my fiction since I barely had time to write.  I also didn't have a lot to report on since I last wrote.

First off, everything regarding the launch of my next book was completely driven by money. Not the money that I was going to make, but the money I didn't have for the various costs for release.  Editing, formatting the interior, formatting the exterior, printing costs, merch costs and not to mention having an honest to gawd launch event.  Well, since October, I received a couple of bonuses from my job and most of this went to cover these costs.  Hooray! 

Other than write in my other projects, which I should blog about in the next few weeks, I haven't really accomplished anything to type about.  Not a full blown blog post anyway.  Check out my Twitter feed @thebproofghost to see all of my tiny updates and various thoughts.

I also would like to give a shout out to the Evansville Local Authors and the Midwestern Writers Guild.  I joined these two groups hoping to make much needed connections.  I wasn't even sure there was a local author community in Evansville, Indiana, but low and behold, there is.  I really didn't care to look before, again, socially different introvert.  I was insanely nervous when I went to my first meeting, but I've gone to several since.  I even helped run a presentation on copyright law at the Oaklyn Branch of the Vanderburgh Library.  I guess I've come a long way since joining the groups.

Thanks to all of the local authors I've met and who have helped me thus far.  I'll be sure to write some blog posts where I talk about them individually or one fat post laying out what each author is about before the next joint event.

Sorry that I'm being long winded, there is just a lot to get to before the main event which is the release of the second BulletProof Ghost novel, In Spades.


The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades
will be released on August 19, 2017.

There will be a launch event at Barnes & Noble on Green River Road in Evansville, Indiana.  I'll be there from 1:30p - 3:00p selling and signing copies of both The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades and the second edition of the previous book,
The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes.


The Address is 624 S Green River Rd, Evansville, IN 47715
In case you didn't want to Google it.

Boom!  Thanks to Barnes and Noble, Evansville for having me.  Thank you to Mariana Mudd, that location's Business Development Manager, specifically for saying yes to this event.

I'll put up another post after this detailing other events I'll be at in the next two months.  There's a lot going on, so if you want to drop by and get some action packed scifi novels, then that would make you a really cool person.  Just saying.

Thanks for the support so far.  There's a lot of distance to cover before I'll be satisfied.

-Jake dh












Sunday, July 24, 2016

Upgrade for the $1 level of the Indiegogo!



The $1 level for the Indiegogo campaign has been upgraded. You can get digital versions of both BPG books for $1?! Yes, check it out or upgrade to a signed version of the new book, The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades for $10!

Sunday, July 10, 2016

You can now Pre-Order The Bullet Proof Ghost: In Spades!

Click the link below to Preorder BPG: In Spades or many other rewards!


Yes, it's finally here!  Your chance to get a signed copy of the second novel in The BulletProof Ghost saga before anyone else does.  The main event is at the top of the rewards: For only $10 you get a copy of BPG: In Spades signed by the author Jake dh and editor Sarah Harris.  You will also get a digital copy of the previous book, BPG: Prototypes to get you up to speed if you missed it.  This digital copy can be sent to you the moment you order it if you wish, so while we put the finishing touches on the book, you can read the introduction to The BulletProof Ghost universe.

There are several other rewards including button pins, t-shirts, signed art and having your name and physical description incorporated into the third book in the series (which is currently being written).  All of the custom rewards will be exclusive to this Indiegogo, so get yours before the end of the campaign.  

The money from this campaign will go into printing costs, advertising and a book tour that will reach into next year.  How many stops will there be on the tour?  That depends on how many backers we have and how much we raise. 

Thanks in advance and I appreciate every dollar pledged.  I can't wait to release this book and with your help the launch will be better than Prototypes' launch by a hundred fold.  

Later

-Jake dh

Also:  There are two secret perks that cannot be accessed through the Indiegogo and only through this blog, social media and the website.  This is a special thanks you to everyone who's followed my work through the years.




Saturday, May 21, 2016

Newsletter, New Email Address & New York!!

I have a new email address.  I created it for the sole purpose of starting a BulletProof Ghost newsletter.  It's Jakedh@BulletProofGhost.com
I may keep an eye on the other email address for a while, but I'll be winding its use down since I'm actually paying for this new one.

Also if you want to get the new weekly newsletter when I start sending them out (probably on Sunday).  Just shoot me an email at the above address with the title 'Add Me to Newsletter'.

As far as other updates are concerned, I have a Periscope account now.  You can search for it under 'Jake dh #BPG #Author' and it should pop up.  I have a couple of broadcasts on there already.  I'm trying to use it to chronicle the process of the next announcement.

That announcement is that we are 100% going to New York for the Writer's Digest Annual Conference!  I may have mentioned this before, but there were a couple of wrenches thrown into the process that may have kept us from going.  All of that is solved now.  We are registered and all there is left to do is book the hotel and flight.

The purpose of the trip is to participate in the 'Pitch Slam'.  A Pitch Slam is where I get to pitch my book (or in my case series) to an actual literary agent.  In this case, it means I get to pitch it to 10 agents inside of an hour.  If one of them chooses to represent me, then BPG might end up being on store shelves in the near future, but only if I'm for reals published.

This is all very exciting, but I will keep pushing forward with the second draft of the second book in the series, The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades.  I should have the lion's share of the book done this weekend.  Hopefully there will be a preview up on this very blog within a couple of weeks.  I'll have some more news about In Spades later this weekend and next week.  Stay Tuned.

Thanks for the support.  This may be the beginning of a bright future for The BulletProof Ghost.\\

-Jake dh

Monday, November 24, 2014

After Geek Galaxy and Beyond!

Geek Galaxy has come and gone, but what's next for The BulletProof Ghost?

If you read this blog or frequent the Twitter feed, you'll know that last weekend, I took The BulletProof Ghost to Geek Galaxy.  GG is a local comic convention, which is in its first year.  The picture above shows my booth, which had all types of neat swag, including the actual novel, The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes.

The con itself went about how I expected.  I didn't sell a ton of books, but I made several solid social connections, some may even lead to other work.  One in particular may lead to short stories of mine appearing in a comic anthology.  Which is neat.

This was my first convention and therefore a learning experience.  I wasn't looking to strike it rich and several people heard about the book that came to the booth.

The next six months will have several developments.  First off, the second book, The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades, will be released by then.  A free preview for In Spades will be posted here before Christmas, is all goes well.  The next week will give me a bit of free time and I really need it.

The other big event will be EvilleCon.  This is an anime convention that I've gone to once before, but as a consumer, not an exhibitor.  I personally talked to one of the people running EvilleCon (calls himself The Ox King, and he looks the part).  He said that there will be several authors there, so hooray!

I may have a store up, but after GG, I may not.  The demand for the non-book merch is a little low at the moment, so I'll wait until that picks up before putting in the effort.

Thanks for the support.  Be sure to follow me on Twitter for current updates @TheBProofGhost and keep an eye on the website as well.  www.TheBulletProofGhost.com.  Stay tuned.

-Jake dh

Monday, November 3, 2014

Geek Galaxy is Only 12 Days Away!!


Ad Created by Susan Hayes (inspired by James Price's design).

So, Geek Galaxy is rolling up.  I just ordered another batch of The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes.  They will be here before the Con.  I'm working on getting shirts made.  The light colored ones will look like this:

Get your's at Geek Galaxy!

These will be for sale at Geek Galaxy for $12 ($14 XL and up).  There will be a limited number, so get yours as soon as you arrive!

I wanted to sell a black t shirt, but I will not have the money to buy them.  Not to bore you with the details, but I'm getting the white/grey ones at a cheaper price.  I may run an IndyGoGo to promote the second book, once it's out.  The promotional side of this has been far more costly than I thought.

There will be license plates to buy.  



Both of these are already made and will be available in limited supply at Geek Galaxy, so get yours as soon as you get there.  These will be on sale for $7 each.

We will also be selling button pins, which I do not have a picture of yet.  I also don't have a price yet.

The books will be on sale for $7 each and signed for free by me, Jake dh.  If you have a copy you've already purchased, bring it and I'll sign it for free.  

There should be posters as well, but I can't 100% confirm that as of yet.

This will be an experience, considering I'll be promoting a not illustrated novel, which is a little out of place, but it is a Geek convention.  A ton of Geeky things start out as books and BPG may become a graphic novel in the future, soooo.... fuck it.

Thanks for the support and I hope to see you there!

Saturday, October 18, 2014

Fall 2014 BulletProof Blog Tour

The BulletProof Ghost is on the road... if the internet were a road, which it's not.  BPG is on the virtual road that is other author's blogs!  BPG has been featured on several blogs as of late and I thought is was high time to put them all in one place... which is here.  Check out the links below.  The posts have info that is posted all over this blog, but the author's blogs themselves may interest you.  Enjoy!

This blog refers to BPG: Prototypes as a Mystery, which it is to some extent.  I'll allow it!  Joking aside I've seen Prototypes called a mystery, horror and young adult, so however you interpret it is fine with me as long as you liked it.
And no, that is not a typo... so don't fill up the comments with, 
"Jake's at it again with his goddamn typos."

Andrea is a nice lady with a neat looking blog.  Check it out as she welcomes me to the indie author scene.  Hopefully it isn't like the hard core punk and metal scenes I used to be into... mosh pits are hard on a little guy like me.  Screw it, time to throw some 'bows! (double bass pedals)

There will be more stops on the tour in the coming weeks.  As this page is updated, I'll let you know on the Twitter machine and teh Book of Face.  Laters.

Romance Beckons
Yes, BPG is not a romance series, but the author of this blog does write romance AND she was nice enough to feature me.  Check out the Author Spotlights section to see her book series featured on this page!

Ann Everett Talkin' Twang

Five on Friday Interview
This is a bit different, because it is an actual interview with yours truly (Jake dh!).  Check it out to get an insight into my slightly disturbed psyche.

Lindi Lamont (LindaLindi.com)

Suz DeMello's Velvet Lair
If you couldn't tell from the blog's title, Suz's writing can get a bit steamy. I'm glad she had room for a bullied 13 year old who is turned into an adult cybernetic killing machine.

Thursday, October 2, 2014

Book Ninja Review of The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes

So this review was the best yet.  I have had a few more pop up on Amazon.  BPGP was getting 4 stars, but now I've started to get hit with 5 out of 5 star reviews.  Book Ninja's review falls into this category.  Book Ninja is another site that does not put their reviews on their actual site.  They post directly to Amazon, so I'll post the review here.

The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes

Jake dh has written an action-packed sci-fi adventure with an imaginative storyline. Kyle is brought back slowly from a sure death – half human half machine and trained to be a fighter in a war he never enlisted in. His creator has big plans to change the world. Kyle retains his humaneness and may have plans of his own. This story is exceptionally well-written and draws the reader in immediately. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and look forward to the next book in this series.

 Highly recommended!

5 out of 5 Stars

I'm glad I'm getting more positive feedback.  Full disclosure, I did pay to have the review done expediently, but not for content.  They give negative reviews, I'm just glad I wasn't one of them.

I'll be doing a blog tour soon enough, keep an eye on my twitter for more updates on the tour. @Thebproofghost

-Jake dh

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Book Sisters Review of The BulletProof Ghost: Prototypes

REVIEW!!


So the first for reals review is up for BPG: Prototypes.  The Book Sisters don't post their reviews to their site.  Full disclosure, they do charge and I did pay.  Apparently they do give out shitty reviews and are supposed to let me know before they post it up on Amazon, Goodreads, etc.  They didn't.  Fortunately for me, they gave me 4 out of 5 stars, which is a positive review   I thank them for their honesty, which will affect the second edition that will release later this year.  She is pretty honest, so there's bad with the good.

Kyle was a really fascinating main character. He starts out as a 13-year-old human teenager who is repeatedly bullied, and then killed. Definitely an interesting start to what will undoubtedly be an intriguing series. Three years have passed, and he is now a robot that is created to do the bidding of William, his creator. In exchange, William promises Kyle revenge on the boys that murdered him. Unfortunately, even though Kyle is now a robot, he still has some human tendencies. He doesn’t believe he can go through with his murderous plan. During his training, he comes across another human turned robot named 004. Kyle is ordered to destroy Four but instead befriends him. This book was sort of a Robo-Cop, Short Circuit, Star Wars mash-up with a YA twist (with the language maybe not so YA). I loved seeing the world through Kyle’s human eyes and watching the computer program within him battle with who he is. The plot isn't really original, but the action along with the exciting twists and turns definitely sets it apart from other books in the same genre. The book had such great detailed descriptions, making the few typos and editing errors easy to overlook. Although at times I felt the story was a bit forced - especially Kyle's thinking and dialogue. But other than those few instances, it was fast paced, and I found myself rooting for Kyle all the way.


4 out of 5 stars

End of Review
I see the Robocop (I guess), though the influences are a little more Goku: The Midnight Eye (obscure anime, look it up) and a little Guyver Anime as well.  I hear the Robocop comparison from time to time, but I guess if you use cybernetics to bring someone back to life, you'll get that (DC comics' Cyborg, cyber-ninjas in Mortal Kombat, etc). That's not a dig at the reviewer, she did a good job for an Amazon formatted review.  Short Circuit?  I'm not sure if Number/Johnny 5 was the reference for CP 005.  I came up with that designation in high school, but I think I just went with a number that had several numbers behind it so I could bring other prototypes into the mix down the road (sorta spoilers).  
I honestly thought the violence and language might detract, but it didn't and the criticisms were more technical.  Though the book was edited and I haven't heard this before, I'll give it another read before I release the second edition in a couple of months.  
Thanks to The Book Sisters for the positive review and I'm looking forward to the next review. 



Pick up your Kindle Ebook or Physical Softback copy today!

Sunday, September 21, 2014

Updates: BPG: In Spades, Geek Galaxy and Feedback on Prototypes



So, the link on the right for the physical copy has been converted into the Amazon version.  I've given several  copies of Prototypes away to friends, family and co-workers.  The feedback has been really positive.  One of my friends said he didn't know what to expect, but not what was happening in the first chunk of the book.  I guess he expected a normal super hero origin, but I tried to buck a lot of those conventions.  Origin stories are normally a little clunky and I wanted to avoid that.

I'm trying to figure out the marketing side of the self publishing biz, but I'm still stabbing in the dark without the funds I need.  I may end up doing an IndyGoGo in order to afford Geek Galaxy.  I also need more reviews for Amazon.  In order to use the newletter-type promotions, I need more reviews with a 4 star or higher average rating.  BPG Prototypes is at 3.8 due to a goddamned troll giving it a one star rating.

 I suspect it might a some one I knew in college.  His name is Crazy Face, but if you look at his public wishlist it's under the name Davi and it is full of computer and camera equipment.  There is only one person I know/knew that is named David and has those specific interest (he opened up a video service for weddings or something, so that fits even more).  I shouldn't be fretting over this so much, but it's making things hard for me, but I'll overcome.  Haters gonna hate, but it still pisses me off. Once you read the book, please put up review.

*I did get a good 4 star review from a stranger that picked up the book.  This pleases my Kinetic Blade!

The BulletProof Ghost: In Spades is coming along nicely.  I have the Prologue and part of the first chapter finished.  I have a lot of scenes in mind, but I'm tempted to write them out of order.  That's not a good idea... but I may do it anyway.  I'm going to try to complete a preview in the next few weeks, since I don't have to work at my job-job next weekend like I thought I might.

Once the preview is done, I'll post it up on here.  I'm also thinking about making a 2nd Edition of Prototypes with a preview to In Spades in the back.  This would be great for Geek Galaxy.

Speaking of, Geek Galaxy has my profile up.  I'm working on a few swag designs.  I'll have pics up on the twitter and instagram.  I'm looking forward to the convention on November 15 and 16, but being the  only straight up author there is going to be a little awkward.

I'll post more updates as they come.  Thanks for the support so far!

-Jake dh