PAGE ONE (five panels)
Panel 1. The panel is black.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
DIDN'T KNOW WHERE I WAS. I COULDN'T
REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED.
Panel 2. The scene is of a hospital
room from the point of view of someone laying in a hospital bed. The vision is blurred slightly though.
1 KYLE (narration box) THEN
THINGS STARTED TO COME BACK TO ME.
MEMORIES.
Panel 3. The panel has a blue color
mask/tint. KYLE is falling down the
stone stairs in the park from the previous issue. He is rolling down the stairs. His bike is bouncing behind him.
1 KYLE (narration box) THEN
SENSATIONS STARTED TO COME BACK TO ME.
MOSTLY PAIN.
Panel 4. The panel is tinted blue
again. KYLE is at the bottom of the
stairs. The view is a close up on his
upper body. He is bleeding from the nose
and from a cut on his forhead. His arm
is bent in an unnatural, more than likely broken, way.
1 KYLE (narration box) THAT'S WHEN I STARTED TO
CRY.
Panel 5. The panel is tinted blue
again. It is the same angle as the
previous panel. The bike has landed on
KYLE. He is knocked unconscious by
this.
1 KYLE (narration box) THAT'S WHEN I REALIZED THAT
I WASN'T DEAD.
PAGE TWO (one panel)
Panel 1. KYLE is laying in a hospital
bed. He has a bandage on his forehead, a
black eye, and his arm is in a cast. A
tear is falling from his eye, but his face has a blank stare on it.
1 KYLE (narration box) THAT'S WHEN I STARTED
WISHING I HAD DIED.
PAGE THREE (five panels)
Panel 1. The angle is from the left side of KYLE. KYLE'S head is turned to the side. His mother(KAREN) is sitting in a chair with
her face in her hands.
1 KYLE: MOM.
Panel 2. Close up on KAREN'S
face. Her make-up is streaming down her
face from tears. She looks slightly
surprised. No Dialogue.
Panel 3. KAREN has her hand on the
back of KYLE'S head. New tears are
coming from her eyes.
1 KAREN: HONEY,
OH MY GOD. WE THOUGHT YOU MIGHT NOT WAKE
UP. YOU HAD QUITE AN ACCIDENT.
Panel 4. Close-up on KYLE. He is looking forward. He looks frustrated.
1 KYLE: IT WASN'T A
ACCIDENT.
Panel 5. KAREN is standing over KYLE'S bed now. She looks angry. Her fists are balled up.
1 KAREN: THOSE
LITTLE BASTARDS ARE GOIN' TO JUVIE THIS TIME.
I PROMISE, HONEY.
PAGE FOUR (Five panels)
Panel 1. A police officer is standing
in front of KYLE'S hospital bed writing notes on a pad.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
TOLD THEM WHAT HAPPENED. I KNEW THIS
WASN'T GOING TO ACCOMPLISH ANYTHING AT THE TIME.
Panel 2. IRENE and KEVIN are sitting on the other side
of the room now. The police officer is
slightly in frame.
1 KYLE (narration box) NICK'S
FATHER WAS GOING TO COVER FOR HIM. EVEN
FOR A THIRTEEN YEAR OLD THERE WERE THINGS I KNEW THAT COULD PROVE MY STORY.
Panel 3. The police officer was leaving the room. The angle is from above the room.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
COULDN' T REMEMBER IF I SAW ANYONE DRIVING AROUND OR WALKING BY. HOW COULD THERE NOT BE? WAS I THAT UNLUCKY?
Panel 4. The officer is walking back in.
1 KYLE (narration box) WHEN
THE COP RETURNED AN HOUR LATER AND SAID THAT NICK AND THE OTHERS WERE PLAYING
BASEBALL AT HIS FATHER'S HOUSE AT THAT TIME.
I WISH I COULD SAY I WAS SURPRISED.
Panel 5. The angle is from the front
of the bed. KYLE, KAREN, IRENE, and
KEVIN are all in the frame. KAREN,
IRENE, and KEVIN are looking at the ground.
KYLE is looking directly into frame.
1 KYLE (narration box) DISAPPOINTED, BUT NOT
SURPRISED.
PAGE FIVE (six panels)
Panel 1. IRENE is sitting on the floor
looking up at KYLE.
1 IRENE: ‘ONE
OF THE BOYS BROKE HIS ARM, SLIDING HOME AND IS HERE IN THE HOSPITAL', WHAT AN
ASSH*LE.
2 KEVIN (off panel) Irene.
Panel 2. KYLE and IRENE are looking at
KEVIN, who is sitting in a chair.
1 IRENE: HE
TOLD KYLE THAT THE BUMP ON THE HEAD MUST HAVE CONFUSED HIM. CONDESCENDING DOUCHE-BAG.
2 KEVIN: LOOKS
LIKE YOUR HONORS ENGLISH ISN'T A WASTE AT LEAST.
Panel 3. Close-up on KYLE.
1 KYLE: JOSH
IS HERE IN THE HOSPITAL. I'M GLAD HE GOT
WHAT HE DESERVED FOR CHASING ME.
Panel 4. Close up on KAREN.
1 KAREN: DON'T
THINK LIKE THAT, HONEY. WHAT YOU DID WAS
SELF DEFENSE.
Panel 5. The angle is above everyone
in the room.
1 KAREN: REVENGE
HURTS YOU AS MUCH AS IT HURTS THEM. YOU
AREN'T LIKE THEM. DON'T LET THOSE
BASTARDS CHANGE THAT.
Panel 6. Close-up on KYLE.
(Continued)
1 KYLE (narration box) MOM.
(new box) SHE
ALWAYS KNEW HOW TO MAKE ME FEEL SPECIAL.
SHE ALWAYS MADE ME FEEL BETTER.
PAGE SIX (five panels)
Panel 1. A dark figure is walking down
the hall. His arm is in a sling and he
is in a patient's gown.
1 KYLE (narration box) THAT NIGHT I HAD TWO
VISITORS.
Panel 2. JOSH is standing in the
doorway looking at KYLE. No dialogue.
Panel 3. KYLE'S eyes drift open.
1 KYLE: THE HELL?
Panel 4. A close-up on Josh's
face. His eyes are full of scorn and hate.
1 JOSH: YOUR
MOM STEPPED OUT. I WAITED FOR A HOUR FOR
THE BITCH TO LEAVE.
Panel 5. KYLE is sitting up. He looks slightly scared, but trying to be
brave.
1 KYLE: WHY ARE YOU HERE?
PAGE SEVEN (eight panels)
Panel 1. JOSH from the waist up is
shown. His arm is in a sling.
1 JOSH: NICK'S
DAD. HE SAID THAT YOU'RE OFF
LIMITS. THAT WE GOTTA LEAVE YOU ALONE.
Panel 2. Close-up on JOSH from the
right side of his face. He's looking
down slightly.
1 JOSH: I'M
NOT. I'M NOT DROPPING THIS. I'LL GET YOU BACK FOR THIS. I SWEAR.
I CAN'T PLAY THE REST OF THE FOOTBALL SEASON 'CAUSE OF THIS.
Panel 3. Close-up on KYLE.
1 KYLE: CRY ABOUT IT THEN.
Panel 4. Full body shot of Josh
stepping forward.
1 JOSH: WHAT THE
F*CK DID YOU SAY TO ME?
Panel 5. The shot is of JOSH from
behind. A hand is laid on his
shoulder. No dialogue.
Panel 6. JOSH is looking over his
shoulder right at AL. AL is smiling.
1 AL: HE
SAID CRY ABOUT IT.
Panel 7. The shot is of AL and JOSH from the
side. AL is punching JOSH in the
stomach. No dialogue.
Panel 8. AL throws JOSH to the
side. JOSH is falling with one foot
barely on the ground.
PAGE EIGHT (five panels)
Panel 1. JOSH is scambling away with
AL watching from the background (with JOSH in the foreground).
1 KYLE (narration box) JOSH
DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING. HE JUST RAN BACK TO
HIS ROOM. I SAW HOW MUCH OF A COWARD HE
WAS. IF THE DECK WAS STACKED IN HIS
FAVOR. IF HE WAS STRONGER. HE FELT LIKE
A GOD.
Panel 2. AL is sitting down in KYLE's
room.
1 AL: SORRY
I'M LATE, IT’S LIKE TEN OR SOMETHING.
SORRY, MY DAD SAID I HAD TO GO TO SOME FAMILY FUNCTION FOR HIS
COMPANY. IT WAS LIKE TWO HOURS
AWAY. I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW ABOUT THIS
UNTIL I WAS THERE.
2 KYLE: IT'S FINE.
3 AL: MY
DAD SAW YOUR MOM IN THE HALL AROUND THE CORNER.
THEY'RE TALKING ABOUT SOMETHING.
Panel 3. Close-up on KYLE laying back in his bed
closing his eyes.
1 KYLE: THANKS FOR THAT.
2 AL: HE
HAS A BUSTED ARM. I FEEL A LITTLE BAD. IMAGINE THAT.
1 KYLE: HE DOESN'T DESERVE OUR
PITY.
Panel 4. Close-up on AL.
1 AL: HE'S
NOT GONNA TOUCH YOU. I WON'T LET HIM OR
ANY OF 'EM. I SWEAR. NOT AFTER THIS.
Panel 5. Far away shot from above of both AL and KYLE.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
BELIEVED HIM. I STILL BELIEVE HE MEANT
WHAT HE SAID, BUT NEITHER OF US COULD HAVE KNOWN WHAT CAME NEXT.
PAGE NINE (six panels)
Panel 1. NICK is standing in his
living room. Its large and there is a
fireplace behind him. The room has a
warm feeling to it in terms of coloring.
NICK'S Father MAYOR RUDOLPH VYLE is in the room pacing in circles. No
dialogue.
Panel 2. Close up on NICK. His nose is bleeding and he's crying. He is still standing at attention like a
soldier.
1 RUDOLPH: THIS
COULD HAVE BEEN A GREAT EMBARRASSMENT TO ME, BOY. I'M THINKING ABOUT A RUN AT GOVENOR IN SIX OR
SO YEARS. THIS COULD HAVE DONE ME IN.
2 NICK: I'M SORR...
Panel 3. RUDOLPH'S hand is swiping
across NICK'S face. No dialogue.
Panel 4. Far away shot. NICK is on his hands and knees.
RUDOLPH: GO
TO YOUR ROOM YOU F*CKING DISAPPOINTMENT.
Panel 5. NICK walks to the right of
the panel and RUDOLPH walks to the left.
PAGE TEN (eight panels)
Panel 1.
RUDOLPH walks into an office like room
where another man is sitting. The man is
JOSH'S father DR. GEORGE CONRIGHT.
1 DR. CONRIGHT: NOW THAT YOU'RE
FINISHED WITH YOUR SON.
2 RUDOLPH: DISAPPROVAL?
1 CONRIGHT: NONE OF MY BUSINESS EITHER WAY.
Panel 2. Close-up on CONRIGHT lighting
up a cigar.
1 CONRIGHT: SO,
WHY DID YOU CALL ME HERE? TO SEE IF I'M
GOING TO KEEP UP MY SIDE OF THE STORY?
1 RUDOLPH: NO. I'M SURE OF YOUR LOYALTY ON THAT PART. I NEED SOMETHING ELSE FROM YOU.
Panel 3. Close-up on RUDOLPH with a
glass of scotch held up to his face.
1 RUDOLPH: SOMETHING
FAR MORE SERIOUS. YOU HEARD OF MY
THOUGHTS ON RUNNING FOR GOVENOR. THE GOP
EXPECTS ME TO HAVE NO SNAGS IN MY MARCH TO THE GOVENORSHIP.
Panel 4. Side shot of RUDOLPH standing and CONRIGHT
sitting.
1 RUDOLPH: IN
FACT I'M GOING TO SECURE MY IMAGE AS A LOW CRIME, SMALL TOWN MAYOR. I NEED TO KNOW YOU'RE GAME FOR WHATEVER I
NEED YOU FOR. YOUR SON BREAKING HIS ARM
IS OF NO CONSEQUENCE IN YOUR LOYALTY SO I'M ASSUMING YOU WILL GO FURTHER.
Panel 5. Close-up on CONRIGHT. He looks worried at this point.
1 CONRIGHT: HOW MUCH FURTHER?
(more)
2 RUDOLPH: I'VE
MADE A DEAL WITH A GROUP THAT WILL IN TURN DO FAVORS FOR ME. A GROUP THAT ISN'T QUITE MAINSTREAM AND WHO’S
ASSOCIATION WITH ME WILL BE KEPT QUITE SECRET.
Panel 6. Same as before.
1 CONRIGHT: ARE
YOU TALKING ABOUT THE SPADES? I...
THEY’RE LIKE THE MAFIA. MOST PEOPLE
THINK THEY DON'T EVEN EXIST.
2 RUDOLPH: WHICH
IS WHY THIS WILL WORK. WHICH IS WHY I
CAN USE THEM. OF COURSE IF THINGS GO
WRONG WITH OUR DEALINGS, I NEED THE CORONER OF OUR TOWN TO SPIN WHATEVER STORY
I SEE FIT.
Panel 7. Above shot of both men. CONRIGHT has gotten up and is pacing.
1 CONRIGHT: THIS IS BIGGER THAN... I'M
SHOCKED... I...
2 RUDOLPH: STOP IT. GROW THE
F*CK UP.
Panel 8. Side shot of CONRIGHT. A revolver is pointed at his forehead. The barrel is touching his face. No Dialogue.
PAGE ELEVEN (four panels)
Panel 1. The shot is from behind
CONRIGHT for you can see the calm and cool expression on RUDOLPH'S face.
1 RUDOLPH: I
NEED TO KNOW THAT DR. GEORGE CONRIGHT IS GAME.
IF NOT, MY NEW FRIENDS CAN MAKE YOU DISAPPEAR.
Panel 2. Close up on RUDOLPH.
1 RUDOLPH: DO YOU WANT TO DISAPPEAR?
Panel 3. Close up on CONRIGHT. He looks like his will is broken and is
ashamed of what he is saying. His eyes
are pointing down.
1 CONRIGHT: NO.
Panel 4. RUDOLPH is putting the gun on
the table. CONRIGHT is sitting back
down. RUDOLPH is smiling.
1 RUDOLPH: I KNEW I COULD COUNT ON YOU.
PAGE TWELVE (four panels)
Panel 1. Dilbane Middle School from a
long shot. There are students walking up
the steps into the school.
1 KYLE(narration box) TWO
MONTHS LATER. I REALLY DIDN'T SEE IT
COMING.
Panel 2. KYLE is walking through the
school hallway. The panel is a close
shot. He is looking behind him over his
shoulder. His injuries are healed. He has a scar on his forehead above his
eyebrow. A group of five figures are
standing next to the lockers, but are out of focus.
1 KYLE(narration box) HOW
COULD I THOUGH? I ASK MYSELF THAT
NOW. COULD HAVE I PREDICTED HOW
EVERYTHING WENT DOWN?
Panel 3. Nick, Josh, and their three
friends that chased KYLE down in the previous issue are standing by the
lockers. These are the figures in the
background in the previous panel. The
view is from within the middle of the group, so not all five need to be in
panel. NICK is holding something, but
it's obscured by one of his friends' shoulder.
NO DIALOGUE.
Panel 4. Close shot on Nick's
eyes. His expression is hateful.
1 NICK: LET'S
F*CKING DO THIS.
PAGE THIRTEEN (two panels)
Panel 1. KYLE is in a gym locker
room. He is in a workout outfit
consisting of a tank top and shorts. DMS
is displayed on the front. He is tying
his shoes on a stone bench that is placed right next to the lockers (the
'bench' is part of the concrete floor that is raised to locker height). NO DIALOGUE.
Panel 2. The shot is pulled back to
show that NICK is standing in the entrance way in normal clothes. A couple puddles of water can be seen on the
floor (presumably where the students didn't dry off enough after
showering). KYLE is still tying his
shoes and doesn't see NICK.
1 KYLE(narration box) WHY
AM I EVEN THINKING ABOUT THIS AGAIN? I
HAVEN'T THOUGHT ABOUT THIS IN SO LONG.
PAGE FOURTEEN (four panels)
Panel 1. The shot is from behind. KYLE is looking up and sees NICK, JOSH, and
the other three of the gang.
1 KYLE (narration box) WHY
DIDN'T I FEEL HOW WRONG THIS WAS? THAT
NICK'S DAD TOLD THEM TO STAY AWAY FROM ME.
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN SOMETHING CHANGED.
Panel 2. Close up on KYLE. He looks scared. He looks like he's trying to be brave.
1 KYLE: WHAT IS THIS?
Panel 3. KYLE is getting up to leave. The shot is from above. He is about five feet from the group. NO
DIALOGUE.
Panel 4. Side shot of KYLE and
NICK. NICK has a long kitchen knife
(think Michael Myers) pointed at KYLE. NICK had gloves on. KYLE looks confused.
1 KYLE: NICK... WHAT ARE YOU
DOING?
PAGE FIFTEEN (six panels)
Panel 1. NICK and co. have KYLE
cornered against the lockers/bench. The
shot is from behind NICK.
1 NICK: WHO DID YOU TELL?
2 KYLE: ABOUT... ABOUT WHAT? I DON'T...
Panel 2. Middle shot of Nick, his
knife is visible.
1 NICK: ABOUT
THE DRUGS. WHO DID YOU TELL? MY DAD FINDS OUT AND I'LL STAB YOU.
2 KYLE: NICK.
Panel 3. Extreme close up on
KYLE. His eyes are glossy.
1 KYLE: I
DON'T KNOW ANYTHING. I DON'T KNOW WHAT
YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. I SWEAR. I SWEAR ON MY MOM. I DON'T KNOW.
I DON'T.
Panel 4. The shot is of NICK from the front. JOSH'S hand is on his shoulder. NICK'S face looks repentant. NO DIALOGUE.
Panel 5. NICK is jerking forward to look
threatening. His foot is in a puddle of
water. He is slipping forward.
1 NICK: WELL IF YOU EVER DID
TELL ANY... SHIT!
Panel 6. The shot is from the
side. NICK and KYLE'S faces are an inch
from each other. KYLE has a shocked look
on his face. NICK looks confused.
PAGE SIXTEEN (four panels)
Panel 1. The shot shows NICK from the
front. He has fallen back and his on his
butt. He looks terrified. The three friends are exiting behind JOSH and
NICK.
1 NICK: I... I DIDN'T... I
SLIPPED... I...
Panel 2. The shot is of KYLE from the
front. He is sitting on the ground. He has the knife in his chest around where
his sternum is. Blood is spreading
across his gym shirt. Blood coming out
of his nose. Tears are coming out of
both eyes.
1 NICK (off panel): OH MY
GOD.
Panel 3. The shot is from behind KYLE. NICK and JOSH are running out the door.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
THOUGHT SOMEONE WOULD COME IN TO HELP ME.
NO ONE HELPS ME. THEY LEFT
ME. THEY LEFT ME TO DIE.
Panel 4. KYLE has fallen on his
side. Close up on his face on the
floor. He looks droggy, like his
consciousness if fading gradually as he bleeds to death.
1 KYLE (narration box) EVERYTHING
GETS SO BLURRY AT THIS POINT. MY
SIGHT. MY HEARING.
PAGE SEVENTEEN (four panels)
Panel 1. KYLE is grabbing the knife in
his chest while sitting up.
1 KYLE (narration box) I REMEMBER I WASN'T GOING TO
DIE. NOT YET.
Panel 2. The knife is out of KYLE'S
chest blood is in the air. The affect is
supposed to convey the knife being pulled out.
Only KYLE’S hands are shown, but not the rest of his body.
1 KYLE (narration box) NOT WITHOUT SEEING HER.
Panel 3. Kyle is leaning against the
wall and exiting the locker room tracking blood behind him.
1 KYLE (narration box) IRENE.
Panel 4. KYLE is leaning and tracking blood down the
hallway to two double doors that lead to the gym. NO DIALOGUE.
PAGE EIGHTEEN (six panels)
Panel 1. IRENE has a basketball in her
hands. There are other girls playing in
the background. A teacher is standing
behind her also. She is just staring
into the panel. NO DIALOGUE.
Panel 2. The shot is from behind her legs. The basketball is on the ground (as if she
dropped it). KYLE is in the doorway.
1 IRENE: WHAT... NO.
Panel 3. KYLE is on the floor. IRENE is bending down over him.
1 IRENE: WHAT HAPPENED? NO, NO, NO.
PLEASE... KYLE!
Panel 4. IRENE is looking behind at
the teacher and students. They look like
they are frozen.
1 IRENE: SOMEONE,
ONE... ALL OF YOU... GET A F*CKING AMBULANCE YOU FUCKING MORONS! NOW!
Panel 5. IRENE is holding KYLE'S head
up. She is crying.
1 KYLE (narration box) I
HAD TROUBLE TALKING. I COULDN'T HEAR
VERY WELL. I WAS GOING TO DIE AND I KNEW
IT.
2 IRENE: NO,
COME ON. DON'T GO. I CAN'T LOSE YOU LIKE
THIS. PLEASE, I CAN'T LIVE. YOU CAN'T LEAVE US.
Panel 6. Close up on KYLE.
KYLE: I...
NEEDED TO SEE YOU. I WANTED TO BE WITH
YOU WHEN THE END CAME.
PAGE NINTEEN (two panels)
Panel 1. KYLE'S eyes are closed. He's gone.
IRENE is hugging and crying over his dead body. NO DIALOGUE.
Panel 2. The gym floor is gone and
there is nothing but KYLE and IRENE with black background.
KYLE (narration box) MY
NAME IS KYLE RICHARD. THIS IS HOW I
DIED.
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